Home, Highway, Here

Whisper me kisses,
Darling I'm listening.
The touch of your lips,
Lingers on mine.
This is so distilling ,
This feeling persisting .
And my hands are weary ,
From clenching.
Trying to choke something,
As vast as air.
All as I try to imagine you here.
Trying to place you in front of me here.
Just so I can be with you dear.

Let me know what you think.
Seriously,
Somebody please,
For the love of God,
Critique me!!!!

Dear, Little Miss Sunshine

Listen up girl,
Don't keep your head down.
Let's flip that frown upside down.
Your times not up,
I said we aren't done.
Let kick this in gear and have some fun.
GO!
That boy was just another fish in the sea
But I can't help seeing you lookin' at me.
So if you wanna get together
I'll show you the man I can be.
And then you'll see,
Why worry about him
when you can have me?
Things will get better
You'll See
You'll See

Stone Cold Lilies

These lilies are frozen.
These lilies are stone.
But they become brittle and broken.
When the winter wind blows.

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I have to say that I think my repetitive poetry,
Is becoming a cliche' and in some cases annoying.
But I know, and believe so strongly.
That if my words can some how reach you.
They might change you,
They might bless you,
They might show my love for you.